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Faible [VILLAIN] Jun 9, 2020 3:31:39 GMT Faible Couture likes this

Post by Faible Couture on Jun 9, 2020 3:31:39 GMT

Faible

"God, this is Boring."

THE BASICS

*REAL NAME:*	*Faible, Couture*
*HERO/VILLAIN/VIGILANTE ALIAS:*	*Faible*
*GROUP:*	*Villain*
*RANK:*	*(will be filled by staff)*
*BIRTHDAY + AGE:*	*14/Oct/ 15*
*GENDER:*	*Male (Him, his)*
*SEXUALITY:*	*Heterosexual*
*NATIONALITY:*	*France*
*AFFILIATION:*	*N/A*
*POSITION/CLASS:*	*N/A*

PHYSICAL APPEARANCE

*HEIGHT:*	*5’4”*
*WEIGHT:*	*128 lbs*
*HAIR COLOR*	*Silver White*
*EYE COLOR:*	*Grey/Black.*
*SKIN COLOR:*	*White*
*BLOOD TYPE:*	Ab
*CHARACTERISTICS:*	*Strong French Accent*
*FC NAME (SERIES):*	*Near (Death note)*

Faible is 5'4" Feet tall, His White bangs Covering all but His Black - Cold hearted Eyes. his Expression is always or not if only Neutral, a smile or Frown is rare for Faible. he Commonly wears a White Long Sleeve Collar T Shirt, Accompanied with Dark Blue Denim jeans. Normally he is Usually barefoot, but he often wears Grey Socks when outside.

PERSONALITY

LIKES

Confident - Personalities
Music
Horror Movies
Fame

DISLIKES

Egomaniacs
Cowards
Injustice
Small Children
Capes

RUMOR/SECRET:

Rumor has it that Faible Used to compete in Underground Cage Fights in his Earlier years, according to the Spectators he Murdered Every Competitor while never engaging in hand to Hand combat Once.

Faible at first glance is Perceived as a Heartless, emotionless,Quiet Human Being. but on Second glance it is Revealing that Faible is a Driven, Focused, Cutthroat young Man. if you were to ask Faible what his Motivation was, he would tell you "Fuck off."
Confusingly, That is a short summary of his true motivation. He Never had a true set of Goals in his life, only what he Wants to do the next hour. He Plans out in hours or Days, Nothing too far in the future.

But what are his plans in life? He'd likely tell you
"To give a message to the world, a Message that shows How Pitiful, how Weak and How Fragile Society has become. They Rely on their heroes, while they can barely stand up for themselves." he Believes that from the rise of heroes, Citizens have only counted on others to protect themselves and watch over them.

His excuse for Murdering the innocent, Stealing from the Weak, Or Destroying their Homes Would be "Getting rid of the Weak, to Make a Stronger Society, as only the strong Can Survive.. it's Part of natural Selection." His Personal Morales are Low, as His Emotions follow the Same Pattern.

Faible is a Man Of Mystery, his Fears and Likes are Mostly if not Completely Unknown, But if they are Exploited it will Cause a Great toll of temporary Mental Damage.
Ever Since he learned to Talk, Faible has always feared being put in the wrong, even in his own beliefs. if you were to Fully Prove to him that what he was doing at that Specific moment was Wrong, He'd Lose it for a Short moment. The other fear that faible has is Losing someone he Actually Cares For. now this is the Rarest since Faible's social circle is Nearly Empty if only empty. he Has only Cared for 3 other People, His Old Fencing Master, his Families Chef, and his Strange Lifelong Friend, Who Remains A Mystery As Which he Has never spoke about to anyone before. Which leaves only 2 Actual People to trigger this.

The way that Faible shows Kindness is.. Unique to say the least. he'd usually speak to them as his inferior, as killing them would be a waste of his time. Since Faible has never truly had a Normal relationship with anyone besides A Single Person. to Be Friends with Faible will be a Mystery, one thing will be certain.. he Will Likely Remain Loyal till the end, life or Death. Although obtaining his trust would be one for the Record books.

Faible's Likes Are Broad, but they Are Common. He Spends his Free time Likely Listening to Music, Meditating, Or Watching Horror Movies.

BACKGROUND HISTORY

*PLACE OF BIRTH/HOMETOWN:*	Lyon France
*PARENTS:*	Mother : Abigail Couture Father : Francis Couture (Deceased)
*SIBLINGS:*	*N/A*
*SIGNIFICANT OTHER:*	*N/A*
*OTHER:*	*N/A*

"So.... you Want to know about me? what a Waste of time.."

understanding Faibles mindset is Complicated, but if truly understood then his motives become a little More Clear, As this all started about the age of 6. Everything before was Just a Long workout and needless Chores..

"Keep up Faible, Your A Couture Not a Common Peasant!"
those were the words that were Drilled into his head, after Practicing in nearly everything. ranged from reading, to Fencing, to Martial Arts, to Painting, to Cooking, and to everything else in between. Understanding this Required excellence was Because of the Mighty last name that Couture brought. As the The Courtures Were the Founders
of a Large esteemed Hero Academy, which Used to be known as "Couture Academy High - School." Faibles Parents, Who Were known as Abagail Couture and Francis Couture, Given the School by the generations handed down to them. His Mothers quirk was known as "Pulse manipulation".

They could create Pulse waves from their eyes that Gave a Yellow glow, which created different Shapes and sizes used for combat or interrogation. As his Father's quirk, Was known as "Magnitude Manipulation". He Were able to increase or decrease the size of Objects. Around the Age of 6 Faibles life began to change forever...

"First time using my quirk? All I can remember is the Face of my Father, As I Blasted a hole through his Chest.."

During the usual early morning combat training, in purpose to see if Faibles Quirk has been developed yet, Faible and his father were doing normal training procedures. Everything was going Smoothly, until when his Father gave the same speech about "Being made for greatness" Nonsense, Faible was fed up with his Fathers words.. the Countless hours of pointless courses he took just to make him "Better" Then everyone else. a Large pit of Anger has begin to swell up in Faible for the past months, if not Years that he has been put through doing the same Schedule over and over again.. Ever since the Age of 4, Francis forced fable to begin reading, fighting, and other Courses at an Early age. this Dark pit of Hatred finally was about to Burst, as he Couldn't hold in these feelings anymore.

Before he could try to rationalize, He Placed his hand on his Fathers chest, as He Blasted a Hole through his stomach as he Formed a Glowing Orb Shaped Wave on his hand. on Impact into his Fathers Chest the Orb in his Hand exploded, as it sent a Small shockwave around the Families Garden. As the Orb Shaped wave would Penetrate his Fathers Chest, Both of their Reactions were the same, Mouth Wide open and eyes Struck with Fear. this was the only time where Faible has ever Admitably Regretted his actions, As his Mother Came rushing from hearing the loud Blast, Her face was only filled with horror as she Walked into the courtyard, as she soon Collapsed to her knees.
Faible described it as the first true Experience of his life. as one minute of silence followed the catastrophe. To Faible it felt like an eternity, as his fathers body slowly left faibles hand, his father would suddenly fell flat on the ground. A large thud would be heard as his body laid flat on the ground..

without hesitating, His mother Suddenly Fired a Pulse wave from her eyes, Directed at Faibles heart. With Tears running down Both of their faces, he Turned, as he tried to Defend himself from his own Mother, he Rose his Arms, trying to cover his head. as He would be sent into the Air for a brief moment, the Pulse wave made Contact with his arms shielding himself from the Assault, the Pulse wave would send him flying into the nearby Fences separating the Large family estate property.

"YOU KILLED HIM!"
His Mother would scream.

"YOUR A MONSTER!"
She'd Cry out.

those Were the Last words he Heard by his Mother, As with Blood slowly Erupting out from his Arms, as Without hesitation he tried to spring himself up using his Legs. as he Looked at Mothers Face of horror, his Fight or flight instincts took control of him,Using his legs as he Bent down, Jumping as he sprung up onto the top of the Remaining Fences. as He Began to run across from fence top to fence top, he Did his best to flee the property.

it was an Eery Summer morning, as not being able to move either arm, Faible did his best from jumping from one rooftop to the next, as his Arms were flailing through the air. His Face still Shocked in horror, as his eyes Wide open, his Mouth twitching. he Quickly landed off of the Families property, as he started to run towards a Nearby uninhabited Forest. What was in reality a 2 Or 3 hour Run, felt like He Was Running For Decades, as Out of breathe. Ultimately he had no More Energy, as he Collapsed onto the grassy plain in the Middle of a Forest..

"I Began to contemplate What I had just done, what I did to my Dear old "Father".. in the end, I came to the conclusion that He and my Mother Were Weak.. My father shouldn't of Died so easily, it was HIS FAULT for Being Picked off So easily!.."
".."Heroes"... that is a Word used to Describe someone who is supposed to take care of those who Can't Support themselves.. a Society where we Rely on them Taking care of us.."

"I Began to wander the Forests, as I Eventually found an Urban city, I Began to live like a Peasant.. I Dug through Trash cans for Scraps of food which already Rotten for months, As I Honed in on my Quirk for the next Years.. a Single year had Past and I Decided to join the underground Cage fights in the Urban Area.. Went by the Alias "The Black Bandit", I Never lost a fight once.. At the Age of 8 I Pulled a Couple of Delinquent's together to pull some small jobs, Robbing gas stations, Selling Drugs.. I knew that I Needed to Hone in on my Quirk, and Ever Since that day I Have learned my purpose in life, to Send a message to the world, to show how Fragile and helpless they truly are without their Heroes.."

Faible since then has been able to hit Some of the Largest Companies in France, as the years have gone by, he Has become notorious in the Country of France, as he Decided his Potential lies in Japan, where he will learn the True ultimate potential of his Quirk..

THE ARMORY

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QUIRK & SKILLS

Darkness Wave Emission

TYPE: Emitter
RANK/LEVEL: C-

SUMMARY:
Faibles Quirk Allows him to Release Waves, spirals, rings, pulse, blasts, balls, and bursts of darkness/shadow and use them to damage, push, bind and or Temporarily Slow Targets. He is able to send energy through Many forms of matter creating ruptures, and create a pulse energy that could Blast the target depending on how large the wave / Blast is, as the Level and size of the waves depend upon Faibles control of his Quirk.

SHADOW RUPTURE : Faible sends a three Dimensional Cylinder shape Wave Of Darkness by holding the Front of his hands Open together. Faible then can either Have the Cylinder wave be a Physical Force, By Hitting them with the end of the Wave by Brute force. As the Other Option being a Passive Force, By Submerging the Victim in the center of The wave. the Targets Speed would Begin to Decrease, As the Wave would emit a Powerful gust of Wind that would Begin to Flurry towards the target, Making it incredibly Difficult to Charge forwards. as the Wind Would Blast towards the Target inside the wave.
The Average size of the Shadow Rupture Would be about Roughly 10 Feet in length, or the Size of an Ambulance. Although Extending it’s size Is possible, it can near the Sizes of 19 Feet tall, which nears the Size of a Metro Train, Doing this would Almost indefinitely Strain Faible as this would take up Roughly 76% Of his Stamina.
This Attack is used Well in All Sorts of Ranges, as A Small Wave Could be used as a Blast towards the target, sending multiple Ruptures at a Time to try and act as a Barrage of small Ramming hammers. Or be Used as a Long Range Offensive attack, as using it to Pummel them from Afar.

GHASTLY SPHERES : Faible Emits Around 4 - 6 Purple Glowing Shadow shaped Orbs by Extending his Front Fingertips, while Contracting his Palm. As the Size of the Orbs are the size of a Bowling ball, The orbs are steered by the hand that Casted them, and only that hand. Each Orb Would take a Small Percent of his Stamina, As the Orb’s Would Last Around 1 And half Minutes Before they Evaporate. The Speed of the Orbs is Somewhat fast, the Highest speeds are Around 37 Miles Per Hour. By directing them towards the Target they Will Begin to quickly Track upon getting Somewhat close. Upon impact, a Single Orb will only do Little to Minor Damage,Equaling to feeling like a Tackle to the ground, as the Blast on impact is a pain on it’s own, By the speed of the blast the Target would be Sent to the ground Quickly, causing another Feeling of Pain. Depending on where the Orb Struck, it can range from Different Ranges of Damage, if a Single orb were to Blast at the back It Would still be painful, but nothing serious. If Multiple Orbs, around 3 or 4 Or them were to Blast at the back all at once, then the Blast would be larger, as the Damage dealt would be larger. Faible is Possible to disperse More orbs, As each Extra orb added to the Normal limit of 6 will Cause another Withdraw of Stamina. If However the Orbs are directed back at Faible, he will still Take damage nevertheless.

AMBIGUITY WALL : Faible is able to Cast a Rhombus shape shield By Clenching the palm of his hand and facing his Hand towards himself. A Normal Size Cast Would Cover his Entire body, and An Extra 2 Feet Around Him in every Direction. Roughly Covering around 6.5 Feet in total. The Maximum Standing of the Wall would Be 5 Minutes if the Shield was dealt with No damage at all, as the Durability Depended on how long the Shield would last. Stamina wouldn’t be greatly Affected the Longer the Shield was up, as The Wall can Be Increased in Size, But Doing so Will Take More Stamina. Increasing the Size by an Extra Foot taller would extract another Percent of his Stamina. Casting it in it’s Normal Form Takes 30% By itself. Ambiguity Wall Can Take a Barrage of Attacks, But Can Break Quicker Depending on How Small the Shield is. the Shield Can Also be Used to Bash the Opponent, Which would feel like being struck with a Sledge Hammer in the face.As it would be a Way of stunning the Opponent.
If however the Shield Breaks by Brute force, then it would cause physical damage to Faible As well. If the Breaking of the Shield Was done with a Large enough force, it could have the Risk of Splintering or Shattering faibles Arm that was used to Cast it.

WEAKNESSES/LIMITATIONS:
Faibles Quirk has a number of flaws to keep it in check. Initially, Faible is not immune or unhurt by his Waves. if Someone were to redirect his Waves or Pulses at himself, he would be taken the Damage that would be Dealt. if any of his Ghastly spheres were to be redirected at himself, he would be hurt as if he were the target. Furthermore, Every time Faible Casts a Wave, Pulse, orb, Shield, or Anything in between it Costs stamina. if Faible were to Cast a Normal Sized Shadow Rupture, it would Take about 24% Of his Stamina, casting it again and then Faible will have used 48% of his Stamina. When Faible is running low on his Stamina, he will begin to decrease in speed, quirk Control, and Physical Durability. Meaning if Faible only had 20% of His Stamina Left, he would be Easier to be taken down, as his Quirk Control Could Easily Backfire on him if Redirected. If Faible is Completely out of Stamina, and is trying to Push Further, the muscles in his hands will begin to tear and Rip, as the Bones in his fingertips would begin to follow. if not Treated it Could cause internal Bleeding.
it's best for Faible if he Controls his Stamina in a Fight.
Running and Physically Fighting are apart of the Same Stamina System his Quirk uses. Meaning if he were to Run and Attack, this would take up the same stamina as his Quirk uses. of Course, a Simple Punch would not be Close to taking as much as a Shadow Rupture would. Trying to Improve endurance training with Faible is Extremely Painful, as it Requires him to Burn all of his Stamina and push further for a Few Seconds at a time. Although doing this Many times in one session would cause Way more Harm than improvement.

Faible isn't Completely Defenseless in hand to hand Combat, but it isn't his Specialty. he Knows the Basic left hook, uppercut and Dodge. But he Cannot Hold his Own against someone who is specifically trained in that type of Combat. Meaning he will be More Comfortable at mid or Long range.

Everything has A Shadow

RANK/LEVEL: D+
SUMMARY:
There are always times of Surprise, and those Times Are Dire. Faible has Learned over his years how to Have a Quiet entrance, He is Able to appear in places without people hearing him Even Come close. (similar to Batman) he masters this By Lurking in the Shadows and Quietly Approaching wherever he needed to be. this Can Be Behind someone, in the Corner of a room, in plain sight, Or Even Right next to Someone.

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Faible [VILLAIN] Jun 14, 2020 21:37:37 GMT

Post by junooc on Jun 14, 2020 21:37:37 GMT

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There's a lot of work to be done on this one.

First, the attachments needs to go. Also, we don't know if this was on purpose or if this was by accident, we do know that you had issues with the editor, but that font throughout the app. is distracting as hell. And needs to be cleaned up. Likes and Dislikes are a slight mess too. Might contact Mako or Alphacat for assistance, as they're our code gurus. Doing that may clear up some minor questions. Personality reads kind of odd, seeing as one can be quiet, emotionless, and heartless and still be driven, focused, and cutthroat. It sounds like you're trying to contradict something there, but there's nothing contradict. It's not something we usually harp on, it just stuck out to us.

Secondly is the backstory. For it to even be plausible, age him up ten years. Killed his dad at 15-16 years old, etc. That way he's still edgelord, and still in the plausible area. As he is now, he should be locked up in a mental institute or something the first time he tried to rob anyone. Plus it would also make it more plausible that his quirk is actually strong enough to potentially kill. The C block is where things can start getting lethal, generally. And there's just no way a toddler's quirk is going to be that strong right off the bat. Also, were his parents really that shitty to him? It kind of starts in the middle, so we just don't know. It's fine if they were, sadly there is precedent for it. But we're just kinda curious.

Thirdly, no weapons or gear or anything at all? Not even protection of some kind for your armory? It's fine if you don't, but even in cage fighting, it's hard to imagine him being undefeated or no one even getting close at all. Just something to think about.

Fourthly, and this part is the bulk of it, all deals with your quirk. This first one will deal strictly with the first paragraph of your quirk description. So, is there a baseline attack? If so, how strong is it in feats? For slowing someone down, how much does it slow someone, assuming it's not a special technique? You might see my character Jun Tomoshibi for reference. As it reads right now, it kind of reads like the three special moves below are all that he can do with it, but this first paragraphs makes it sounds like it isn't.

Shadow Rupture: You mention it is a cylinder, and gave it a length, but no diameter. Also, single size please. And a single effect. Either special brute force attack (and feats on how strong it is) or slows people down (again, feats and potentially how long it lasts in posts). It is not a barrage (which if you want a barrage, you should be able to do that with just firing a basic, baseline attack quickly or have a semi-special move, again, see my character Jun Tomoshibi). It also needs a cooldown and an effective range. Or you can have both versions, just separate them out with what I asked for here. Possibly even make them smaller, size wise. As for a cost, how much does it cost him? We don't measure in stamina, we measure in post counts. Typically, a fight lasts about 7-8 posts, some people. If they use their quirk sparingly, could possibly fight for longer, but using special moves or going full ham ticks that down quite a bit.

Ghastly Orbs: "Purple Glowing Shadow shaped Orbs" What? We assume you meant "Glowing purple shadow orbs," but just want to make sure. Turn time into post counts on how long they last, assuming you can use them as mines or something similar, which would then need to be stated. If they hit you, what does it feel like? Being tackles by some scrawny dude and being knocked to the ground isn't the same as being tackled by a big burly dude. What kind of damage are we talking about? Like, heavy bruising like you've been hit by a softball or what? We just don't know any feats of damage or tackling or anything. Also, some wording change, "tackled hard enough to most likely knock a normal person to the ground." There is no guarantee that someone well get knocked down if hit. On a side note, if these are controllable by you, then if they somehow get redirected towards you, couldn't you just force them to move away from you or curve them? Also, we need a set number. None of this 4-6 stuff. A general, set number at a time. And a cooldown and how far they go before they just go poof.

Ambiguity Wall: As a note, if it's a rhombus, you can shoot at his ankles and lower legs and hit him, but then mentions it surrounds him? We're a little confused here, if it surrounds him, then it's not a rhombus. How long does it last in post counts, and generally, if you're using this, it means you can't dodge it, and thus is about to get hit, so the no damage part probably should be removed. One, single size, please. If you want another size, make it weaker or stronger than this one. Speaking of, what does it take to break it? To brute force through it? You say barrage and all, but there's no feats. So we don't know how strong it is. Also, as is, it's too large to shield bash anyone, if it's going to be used like that, it would be much smaller, about the size of what some knights have in medieval times. And the power that it shield bashes people at is way too much. A sledgehammer to the face will kill someone. Not stun, kill. Depending on how strong it is, it will need a cooldown as well, even with the "if it breaks, it breaks my arm" part.

Next is the weaknesses. Your quirk getting reflected back to you, and you taking damage from it isn't a weakness. That's the way most people are. Those that aren't are either mutation types or it's specified that they're immune/resistant to their own stuff in the quirk description. Please remove this part. We don't measure in stamina, we measure in post counts. There is nothing here that really says how long can he keep fighting before any side effects kick in or anything of the like. Slowing yourself down or lack of quirk control (which more details on both of those) is a great start. But we need a little bit more specifics there. Lowering durability doesn't make sense with this quirk let alone in general, so if you could remove it, that'd be great. And does offer a question, is he paralyzing himself like when Jun is using his lightning half? And that's why he's slowing himself down?

You damaging your hands is great, but when does it start? As a darkness/shadow oriented quirk, you need to add Light as a weakness and its effects on you/your quirk. The last two parts, about your hand to hand skill and physical stamina, are fluff or shouldn't be here, and we would like them removed (you can address the stamina part with what I mentioned above about what keeps you from using your quirk all day long and how long you can keep fighting for).

Fifth, the skills. The one that you have makes him seem like you're adding another layer to your quirk? Or trying to tie it to the quirk? It sounds like you're trying to add a supernatural amount of stealthiness here. And for the record, Batman would be B minimum here in stealth. The skill needs to be simplified or clarified and likely bumped up a lot. Which thankfully makes more sense if you're aging him up 10 years. Also, that hand to hand skill you mentioned in weaknesses? This is where you'd have it, under skills, along with all the other stuff you got trained in. Which, don't combine multiple skills into one if you want them all to have the same effectiveness as the rank you list them as, as they share ranks.

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